Cool story Finn, I remember when that happened. The describing words you used helped to make your story interesting, like 'soaked'. Maybe in your next story you might try to add a simile to your describing word. Our ideas are: soaked like a swimming pool-Coops, soaked like water-Cami, soaked like Smooch on a rainy night-Dad, soaked like the sea-Finn, soaked like a tea bag-Mum. We are looking forward to hearing your next story! :-)
Cool story Finn, I remember when that happened. The describing words you used helped to make your story interesting, like 'soaked'. Maybe in your next story you might try to add a simile to your describing word. Our ideas are: soaked like a swimming pool-Coops, soaked like water-Cami, soaked like Smooch on a rainy night-Dad, soaked like the sea-Finn, soaked like a tea bag-Mum. We are looking forward to hearing your next story! :-)
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