Nice use of the adverb 'quickly' to describe how you were running Cameron. I really liked your writing and your last sentence which described the blood trickling down your leg was great. Keep it up and next time see if you could use more than one adverb in your story.
Nice use of the adverb 'quickly' to describe how you were running Cameron. I really liked your writing and your last sentence which described the blood trickling down your leg was great. Keep it up and next time see if you could use more than one adverb in your story.
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