I think my comment from last week may have got lost so I will try again!What did Isabella do this time???! You started off with a good adverbial clause but maybe could have used another one instead of the simile near the end.
I think my comment from last week may have got lost so I will try again!
ReplyDeleteWhat did Isabella do this time???! You started off with a good adverbial clause but maybe could have used another one instead of the simile near the end.